Okay I already told you in my crazy fangirl way how much I love this story, but as a reading of many thing I want to tell you how much I like the way you wrote this as well. It flowed easily without ever boring me. In fact I had to pry myself away from the computer to eat breakfast. lol
The placement of characters was also ingenious and humorous. I'm sure you've heard how much everyone likes Castiel and Crowley, but I also found Bela equally awesome even if there was not a lot of face from for her. Sam's constant wondering if she was really awake or not was funny. Knowing Bela, she was awake... watching him. That's so creepy, but so Bela. lol
And the best thing ever...
"I may not be as tall as you anymore, Gigantor," Sam glared at the new nickname, "But don't forget who wears the pants, Sammy."
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on 2011-09-17 04:21 pm (UTC)The placement of characters was also ingenious and humorous. I'm sure you've heard how much everyone likes Castiel and Crowley, but I also found Bela equally awesome even if there was not a lot of face from for her. Sam's constant wondering if she was really awake or not was funny. Knowing Bela, she was awake... watching him. That's so creepy, but so Bela. lol
And the best thing ever...
"I may not be as tall as you anymore, Gigantor," Sam glared at the new nickname, "But don't forget who wears the pants, Sammy."
Awesome! I'm going to go read more.