So. I said it once and I'll say it again, you just nailed this fic, babe. I listened to you fret a bit here and there about it but when I read it, it was like heaven opened up, "Hallelujah" played, and perfection glittered down to this eart. Seriously, everything about it was awesome and practically flawless. From the grammar (heh, I barely edited anything at all! I mean, O.O) to the characterization to the wonderful descriptions that mix heavenly and earthly and souls and wings and it all still seems believable.
This was just wonderful. All three of them were just poignant, the sexy times so earthly and needy and wanting, and the afterglow just heavenly and happily ever after.
LOL. IDEK if any of that makes sense. But I gotta say that this is definitely one of my favorites fics from you. Just wonderful! :D
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ninetydegrees
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on 2011-04-17 11:46 pm (UTC)This was just wonderful. All three of them were just poignant, the sexy times so earthly and needy and wanting, and the afterglow just heavenly and happily ever after.
LOL. IDEK if any of that makes sense. But I gotta say that this is definitely one of my favorites fics from you. Just wonderful! :D